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empty void feels my heart...nothingness left
where once was creative thoughts
so very cold....i feel nothing but cold....
numbing me to my very core
i try and i try.... to break free
of this hold it has on me
try as i might...it's hold is far greater
shiver goes down my spine
as the darkness closes in all around me......
light fading fast....no where to turn
no where to run.....
just the cold....the darkness
just.....nothing.....nothing left.....
where once was creative thoughts
so very cold....i feel nothing but cold....
numbing me to my very core
i try and i try.... to break free
of this hold it has on me
try as i might...it's hold is far greater
shiver goes down my spine
as the darkness closes in all around me......
light fading fast....no where to turn
no where to run.....
just the cold....the darkness
just.....nothing.....nothing left.....
trying to write....but not much coming....
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I think you're too harsh on yourself, replace your ... with commas and stanzas, and add a few determiners 'an' etc. and you have actually a really good piece.
Gotta say something when you write about not being able to write AND do it well
Gotta say something when you write about not being able to write AND do it well