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Turn Around and See
Turn around and see
Of all the tears I’ve cried
The ones that hurt the most
Were the ones that were for you
Turn around and see
I’m lost in this sea of emotion
Barely staying a float
Still loving you
Turn around and see
The torment in my eyes
Hear the longing in my voice
When I speak your name
Turn around and see
The glowing embers of my love
Did not fade way
They still burn deep within my soul
Turn around and see
The chaos my life has become
Everything has lost its meaning
Since you went away
Turn around and see
That girl with the bright eyes
Is no longer standing here
Instead a darken soul
With barren eyes
Has taken her place
Turn around and see
What you left behind
See all the broken promises
All our tomorrows blowing away
Like dust in the wind
Turn around, just once
Turn around and see
What’s left of me
The desire I still feel for you
Even though
You left only pain for me
Why can't you just turn around?
Turn around and see
How much you mean to me
How much I still need you
Here with me
Just turn around and see
How much I still love you
Turn around
Turn around and see
~cinnamongurl22~ 1/18/05
Turn around and see
Of all the tears I’ve cried
The ones that hurt the most
Were the ones that were for you
Turn around and see
I’m lost in this sea of emotion
Barely staying a float
Still loving you
Turn around and see
The torment in my eyes
Hear the longing in my voice
When I speak your name
Turn around and see
The glowing embers of my love
Did not fade way
They still burn deep within my soul
Turn around and see
The chaos my life has become
Everything has lost its meaning
Since you went away
Turn around and see
That girl with the bright eyes
Is no longer standing here
Instead a darken soul
With barren eyes
Has taken her place
Turn around and see
What you left behind
See all the broken promises
All our tomorrows blowing away
Like dust in the wind
Turn around, just once
Turn around and see
What’s left of me
The desire I still feel for you
Even though
You left only pain for me
Why can't you just turn around?
Turn around and see
How much you mean to me
How much I still need you
Here with me
Just turn around and see
How much I still love you
Turn around
Turn around and see
~cinnamongurl22~ 1/18/05
falling apart while you walk out the door, why can't you just turn around and see how badly i need you
****edited the writing, reworded it just a bit...i reread it today before i went to print it out to sent to a friend
and found some parts i wasnt happy with so i fixed em
****edited the writing, reworded it just a bit...i reread it today before i went to print it out to sent to a friend
and found some parts i wasnt happy with so i fixed em
© 2005 - 2024 cinnamongurl22
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oooooh!!! I LOVE IT!!! absolutly AWESOME!!! Great job chicklet!!!